"When God Asked"

                                Fiction Drama

                           "When God Asked"


Characters in play

God               The supreme statement giver. 

Chitragupta The Accountant of God. 

Yama            The ender of life. 


Krishna        The sinner, betreyar, transgressor, 

                        Villian. 

Amma           The Mother of Krishna. 

Radhe            The Krishna's love. 

Saraswati      The Krishna's love. 

Sudama          The Krishna's best friend. 


Dr. Shushrutha  The Krishna's doctor to do 

                               Surgery. 

Act 1 : Scene 1

The opening scene gives the exposition, the situation on which the story is based. Krishna a 10th standard school boy had died on earth by road accident and now his soul is in God's court to decide whether he must get a second chance to live or die and go to hell. 

Scene 1 God's court. 

Enter Krishna, God, Chitragupta, Yama. 


Yama

A... Krishna there is no chance for your soul to escape. 

Krishna

God I have done good too in my life to live. 

God

What good have you done Krishna?  I have seen only wrong things happening by your life.            Chitragupta... Check his details, has he done anything good? 

Chitragupta

Alright sir here I see... (Clicked the button in the monitor). 

After reading for a while... 

Chitragupta

Sir has helped few people in studies. He has also helped few people in learning and enjoying music which he played. He has also help in the world to old people, poor people by giving money even though it's not his (said laughingly). 

God

Chitragupta why are you laughing. This is a court. We are working on a serious matter. 

Chitragupta

Sorry sir. He has also done bad things in life. 

God

Like

Chitragupta

He has loved 2 girls and made them cry. 

Yama

So God.. Don't waste time send that soul to me. I will teach him a lesson... (Said laughingly ) 

God

Chitragupta what has he done to make those 2 girls cry. And say their names. 

Chitragupta

Your wish is the command. Sir those 2 girls name are, First one Radhe and second one Saraswati. 

God

Ayyo... Those to girls are having our girls name. 

Chitragupta

Silently laughed. 

Krishna

God (said in urgency and shouted) 

Suddenly yama said

Yama

Ushhh... God is thinking don't shout. 

Chitragupta

Laughed a bit again. 

God saw both Chitragupta and Krishna. 

God

Chitragupta does this boy have a best friend? 

Chitragupta

I will check sir. Yes, there is a bo named  sudama who is very close to Krishna. 

God

Aaaa... (Said in excitement) Chitragupta who is he? 


Act 1 : Scene 2


Chitragupta was searching who is sudama and how is he with Krishna in the Earth.                        Chitragupta saw a video where sudama was playing football with Krishna. Suddenly... 

Krishna

Sudama... (Said Shoutingly). Do you see anyone coming there? 

Sudama

No Krishna (said Shoutingly ) 

Sudama suddenly saw someone coming near. 

Sudama

Krishna it's your Amma. (Said Shoutingly ) 

Krishna's Amma was caring a stick. 

Krishna and sudama stopped playing and stood beside a tree. 

Amma

Krishna where were you hiding ? 

Krishna

Nothing Amma I was with sudama. 

Sudama

Yes aunty... 

Amma

The school has ended past 3 hrs. Where you people were. 

Krishna

Sorry Amma I was playing with sudama from that time. 

Amma

I went to sudama's house, there also you were not there. And your friends from school reached home early. So I got tensed. 

As today was result announcement of Krishna's class. He had forgotten to tell. So he said... 

Krishna

Amma I had got distinction in the test. See the result. Krishna showed the result. 

Amma felt happy. 

Amma

Sudama how much is yours ? 

Sudama

Distinction too aunty. 

Amma

Good sudama. Seems like though you both are naughty but you both are good at studies. 

Amma and Krishna went to their house. And with sudama to his house. 


Act 1 : Scene 3

This was the final scene where chitragupta was finishing his checking of Krishna's past life story. 


God

Chitragupta did you see the thing what was in Krishna's life story? 

Chitragupta

Yes Sir. 

God

Did you see any mistake done by Krishna in that story? 

Chitragupta

No Sir. 

God

So yama, this shows Krishna is good with friends and helped few people in life so he must get a second chance to live even though he has done mistakes. Those girls, Radha and saraswati he loved was because of infection. We must not take it seriously. 

Krishna

Right God... (Said in humble manner ) 

God gave Krishna ashirwaad to live back his life and never to do bad things again to come here again by making mistakes. 


Act 1 : Scene 4

Let's come to Earth.                                                     After the accident faced by Krishna, he was taken to nearby hospital. Dr. Shushrutha did a surgery to Krishna and he was alive by God's ashirwaad. 


Dr. Shushrutha

Amma now Krishna is out of danger. 

Amma

Stopped her crying and asked that could she see him. 

Dr. Shushrutha

Yes Amma you can see him. 

Amma went close to Krishna and held Krishna's head and said. 

Amma

I said you be careful

Krishna

Sorry Amma.                                                                  But I spoke with God and yama to come here. And not to do any mistake. 

Amma

(Said laughingly) Don't do comedy again. 


                                {END}





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